Flier questions

I need some advice on a flier that I just made up. What do you think of this?

[CHEESE2009]

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i don't see it? I wanna see it man! lol

sorry, I had some technical issues with getting it up loaded. lets see if this works....

[Steve]

I think your flyer is fine. If you wanted to change anything around you could put this line at the top.

"Do you own any of the follow types of equipment?"

Does it need a tune up or repair?
Are you tired of being overcharged by other shops?
Are you ready to be treated fair?

Visit Superior Power Equipment and get 10% off your engine tune up.
Hurry though this offer is only good until 6/3/XX

Then at the bottom you could put your company name and number.

If you make the top line catchy, you have a better chance at the flyer getting read.