Are you going to run this as a commercial in your local viewing area?
You might want to, not that expensive.
Just a suggestion; For people like myself that are hearing impaired but not deaf, maybe slow your seach a little, people who talk fast make it hard for people with hearing issues to understand what is being said.
Great job! Simple and to the point... I would agree with the comment that you should stretch it out to about 30 sec or longer and slow your speech down a little... but it looks good!
My partner and I are focusing our video content on upcoming services... like we talked about fall and winter lawn care in the last one... the next one will be (PROBABLY) about pressure washing and (POSSIBLY) spring clean-ups to prep for the growing season.