What do you guys think about the flyer?

[cruzgardening]

Originally Posted by Steve Remember, you want your attention getting headline or offer at the top. You want to grab the readers attention as quickly as possible so they will read the rest of the flyer. im still wondering where i should place the 25% off coupon

[mulchrevitalizers]

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Hi friend! Here are my inputs, and as Steve says, try to put the offer at the top to grab the attention quickly. I think you can reduce the size of both boxes and distribute the text more efficiently to gain space for the coupon. If you send me the elements, I can re-do it for you (at no charge!) using photoshop. Let me know. Good luck! Originally Posted by cruzgardening here is the update some changes have been implemented and i am still wondering where i can add the 25% coupon also don't know about the color combination :P let me know what you guys think of the update

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[cruzgardening]

Originally Posted by mulchrevitalizers

Hi friend!

Here are my inputs, and as Steve says, try to put the offer at the top to grab the attention quickly. I think you can reduce the size of both boxes and distribute the text more efficiently to gain space for the coupon.

If you send me the elements, I can re-do it for you (at no charge!) using photoshop. Let me know.

Good luck!

what you think about this one? the corrections have been implemented and the font color was changed

[Steve]

That looks good. While you are experimenting, why not try putting the 25% off coupon at the top where you now have the 'we make it green' wording.

What do you feel would grab your eye more on a flyer 'We make it green.' or '25% off!'

[mulchrevitalizers]

Now it looks much better!

I think you can add the 25% OFF coupon inside the left box at the very bottom. Just play a bit with the spaces.

Originally Posted by cruzgardening

what you think about this one? the corrections have been implemented and the font color was changed

[cruzgardening]

Originally Posted by mulchrevitalizers

Now it looks much better!

I think you can add the 25% OFF coupon inside the left box at the very bottom. Just play a bit with the spaces.

Hi i was trying to add a coupon like Steve mentioned before but i would advertise more for higher end clients and a 25% coupon on the top would bring in clients who are looking for a deal and i can only give them a deal with a contract so what you guys think about this one?

[Steve]

I think you are on the right track.

You may want to experiment with one flyer for one section of town and another flyer for another section of town and see which pulls in more customers. Then you will know which flyer works better.

[mulchrevitalizers]

That's good. Are you going to limit the offer for a limit or expiration time? or does the coupon has to be mentioned or presented in order to be honored?

If so, I suggest you to write in a small note about that at the bottom of the ad.

Originally Posted by cruzgardening

Hi i was trying to add a coupon like Steve mentioned before but i would advertise more for higher end clients and a 25% coupon on the top would bring in clients who are looking for a deal and i can only give them a deal with a contract so what you guys think about this one?

[cruzgardening]

Originally Posted by mulchrevitalizers

That's good. Are you going to limit the offer for a limit or expiration time? or does the coupon has to be mentioned or presented in order to be honored?

If so, I suggest you to write in a small note about that at the bottom of the ad.

I almost forgot about the small letters on the bottom hehe it will be limited time for spring to the begining of summer thanks for the heads up

Originally Posted by Steve

I think you are on the right track.

You may want to experiment with one flyer for one section of town and another flyer for another section of town and see which pulls in more customers. Then you will know which flyer works better.

i already have 2 flyers around town but the place where im targeting is the nicer neighborhood its called La Cresenta i will make 2 flyers and will try them out and see the results for next year. thanks guys! i think after i add the disclaimer on the bottom its ready to print

[Steve]

Keep us posted on how it all turns out!