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Old 04-08-2011, 12:41 AM
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Hey guys im designing a flyer advertising flower beds and Border planting this is a simple designed made in about 20 minutes with some of my work please give advice to make it more pleasing for the eye thanks guys.

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Hey guys im designing a flyer advertising flower beds and Border planting this is a simple designed made in about 20 minutes with some of my work please give advice to make it more pleasing for the eye thanks guys.

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wow didnt notice the picture was lacking all the writing and the words where moved on the header ill try to reload again
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he is the correct picture sorry guys
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Ok...


1. Your name is not a headline. Place it somewhere else.

2. Overall, it's a symmetrical layout but that "box" on the right is taller.
If you can't make that one shorter, make the one on the left the same height.

3. It looks like there are double spaces between words in a few places.

4. Bump everything down so it's not "up against the top" so much - give it some breathing room.

5. Maybe make the space between the three images and the image above a little bigger. (Like at the top portion of the ad)



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Or even consider some kind of special offer at top too. It looks very nice though.
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Not the designer here so you mention a three step process you might want to explain that instead of leaving them guessing.
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Not the designer here so you mention a three step process you might want to explain that instead of leaving them guessing.
I tried adding more info into the 3 step aproach which are, Site analysis, Garden Style and Plant Selection do u have an idea how i can implement this in there i think my brain is fried right now haha

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Ok...


1. Your name is not a headline. Place it somewhere else.

2. Overall, it's a symmetrical layout but that "box" on the right is taller.
If you can't make that one shorter, make the one on the left the same height.

3. It looks like there are double spaces between words in a few places.

4. Bump everything down so it's not "up against the top" so much - give it some breathing room.

5. Maybe make the space between the three images and the image above a little bigger. (Like at the top portion of the ad)



Headline suggestion using text already used:
(spacing/fonts limited with what I have to work with here - just showing to give an idea)



WE MAKE IT GREEN!

Flowerbeds and Border Designs

CRUZ GARDENING SERVICE
Ill work on the design tomorrow i am using Microsoft word to make this hehe so lets see if i can do it all btw i removed my name off the header
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Or even consider some kind of special offer at top too. It looks very nice though.
hi steve i think i might be able to include a 25% off coupon on the bottom i think it would not look that good on the top but then again i have never tried it
thanks for the idea ull see the new one tomorrow its bed time now
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hi steve i think i might be able to include a 25% off coupon on the bottom i think it would not look that good on the top but then again i have never tried it
Remember, you want your attention getting headline or offer at the top. You want to grab the readers attention as quickly as possible so they will read the rest of the flyer.
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here is the update some changes have been implemented and i am still wondering where i can add the 25% coupon also don't know about the color combination :P let me know what you guys think of the update
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