Constructive Critisism wanted

richsoucie · #1 10-20-2010, 10:03 PM

so here is my bussiness card what do you guys think? anything i should change?

mark123 · #2 10-20-2010, 10:10 PM

Lawn care business tips

Hate the font.

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The Cleaning Doctor · #3 10-20-2010, 10:13 PM

To be honest.... keep it simple too much on one side. Move some of it to the back.

logo phone number and name on the front Maybe take the services out of the logo and put them on the back and shrink the logo.

richsoucie · #4 10-20-2010, 10:33 PM

back side is a referral form here is a revision moved some stuff around

The Cleaning Doctor · #5 10-20-2010, 10:37 PM

Try ditching the address. Not really needed on a card these days.

richsoucie · #6 10-20-2010, 10:38 PM

i was actually thinking that as i was trying to find a place to put it on the card

killed the adress

richsoucie · #7 10-21-2010, 01:01 AM

last revision had to change font color in logo because my truck is blue
[IMG]http://www.********.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=202656&stc=1&d=1287640852[/IMG]

richsoucie · #8 10-21-2010, 08:56 AM

final product still trying to aquire .com address

richsoucie · #9 10-21-2010, 10:40 AM

Changed the font and reworded some stuff

[IMG]http://www.********.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=202668&stc=1&d=1287675453[/IMG]

The Cleaning Doctor · #10 10-21-2010, 01:13 PM

Looks better except the word "owner"

Lose it or move it to the right side would be better.

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