My first flyer design

Is this too busy or too much info? Lets have some feedback. Thanks

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Last edited by stew6371; 04-18-2010 at 06:26 PM.

[justin_time]

Lawn care business tips

What program did ya use to make your flyer ? I can't seem to recognize the file type you are using. Please save it as a .doc and we'll be able to open it

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Justin Pitre
Just in Time Yard Services

Sorry. I used open office. Try this. also I will post another version. I made a few small changes.

[justin_time]

Kind of hard to read, not because of the colors but because the font.

Maybe change the font to something easier to read then your flyer is all set.

I'd suggest to change it to Arial or something

[mark123]

Originally Posted by justin_time

Kind of hard to read, not because of the colors but because the font.

I was going to type this exact same thing.

I was kind of thinking the same, but I wanted some responses. I made a change. Now what do you think?

[justin_time]

Better ! You can delete your 2nd page if your going to print the document, it's going to print a blank page for nothing

[mark123]

Comic Sans has weird kerning that I just can't like. The number is still in that old font and you definitely want that legible. It is at least readable now.

Originally Posted by mark123

Comic Sans has weird kerning that I just can't like. The number is still in that old font and you definitely want that legible. It is at least readable now.

I didnt change that. I will though.

Originally Posted by justin_time

Better ! You can delete your 2nd page if your going to print the document, it's going to print a blank page for nothing

I dont know why it has a 2nd page. Thanks for mentioning that. I wouldnt have paid attention when I went to print it. Here is my rough sketch of my business cards and door magnets.
ore critiquing please.

[jklawncare]

bigger image? and if ones a door magnet than id deffinately take alot of the detailed text off..

cars drive by..you need it quick and simple..Name Number and maybe Motto with free estimates and a website..dont go into alot of detail..the text needs to be big enough to read and easy enough to catch the eye