Looking for some critique for my Website

[jymie]

Want to get some feedback on what you guys think of my website. What things you may think it lacks or if it looks ok or not. Thanks for all of your input! http://www.lunchesruslawncare.com

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IMO in the slide show which looks great instead of the pictures saying and some dont the number of the picture dsc12345 name it to something else. I think it looks good.

[swstout]

A very nice web site. You might want to ad a blog. My blog got me listed on the city and county web sites.

Steve

Great website, Jymie.

[jymie]

Originally Posted by swstout

A very nice web site. You might want to ad a blog. My blog got me listed on the city and county web sites.

Steve

Do you have a link to your blog? Maybe I can get some idea's on what to write about and see a format for one. Thanks for the input!

[The Cleaning Doctor]

Ok here goes.

Landing page too much green at least that shade and the page is not centered.

every page you click on has a different color i.e. green, gray, blue or photos. If you want to change themes then use photos instead of colors.

It just doesn't seem to have a cohesive flowing theme.

Don't take this personal as you asked for critique. Hope this helps

[jymie]

I made a few minor changes

http://www.lunchesruslawncare.com

Thanks to all who gave some in sight on what they felt.

[Steve]

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This is the first time i saw that!

How did you come up with that idea?

Ok, I am by no means a website pro, but I noticed several things. There may be a legit explanation that I am not aware of. But here are the things I noticed still.

-the pages are not all the same width,
-some pages are centered,
-some pages are left left justified,
-and there are a different quantity of link tabs on the left side on some pages.


Good luck. I love your website otherwise though.

[jymie]

Originally Posted by Steve

This is the first time i saw that!

How did you come up with that idea?

I wanted a way to capture contact information when people go to the site so that I can market to them. It would be 100% customer inquiry that way and I read it on line by someone, may have been Chestins site, I did it through my Aweber.com account, which is a yearly fee to capture and maintain a mailing list. You can develope mailing campaigns with this service.