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    Hey guys im designing a flyer advertising flower beds and Border planting this is a simple designed made in about 20 minutes with some of my work please give advice to make it more pleasing for the eye thanks guys.

    Cruz Gardening
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    Hey guys im designing a flyer advertising flower beds and Border planting this is a simple designed made in about 20 minutes with some of my work please give advice to make it more pleasing for the eye thanks guys.

    Cruz Gardening
    wow didnt notice the picture was lacking all the writing and the words where moved on the header ill try to reload again

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    • #3
      he is the correct picture sorry guys
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      • #4
        Ok...


        1. Your name is not a headline. Place it somewhere else.

        2. Overall, it's a symmetrical layout but that "box" on the right is taller.
        If you can't make that one shorter, make the one on the left the same height.

        3. It looks like there are double spaces between words in a few places.

        4. Bump everything down so it's not "up against the top" so much - give it some breathing room.

        5. Maybe make the space between the three images and the image above a little bigger. (Like at the top portion of the ad)



        Headline suggestion using text already used:
        (spacing/fonts limited with what I have to work with here - just showing to give an idea)



        WE MAKE IT GREEN!

        Flowerbeds and Border Designs

        CRUZ GARDENING SERVICE

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        • #5
          Or even consider some kind of special offer at top too. It looks very nice though.
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          • #6
            Not the designer here so you mention a three step process you might want to explain that instead of leaving them guessing.
            Liberty Landscaping LLC
            www.libertylndscpng.com
            Woodbridge, NJ

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            • #7
              Not the designer here so you mention a three step process you might want to explain that instead of leaving them guessing.
              I tried adding more info into the 3 step aproach which are, Site analysis, Garden Style and Plant Selection do u have an idea how i can implement this in there i think my brain is fried right now haha

              Ok...


              1. Your name is not a headline. Place it somewhere else.

              2. Overall, it's a symmetrical layout but that "box" on the right is taller.
              If you can't make that one shorter, make the one on the left the same height.

              3. It looks like there are double spaces between words in a few places.

              4. Bump everything down so it's not "up against the top" so much - give it some breathing room.

              5. Maybe make the space between the three images and the image above a little bigger. (Like at the top portion of the ad)



              Headline suggestion using text already used:
              (spacing/fonts limited with what I have to work with here - just showing to give an idea)



              WE MAKE IT GREEN!

              Flowerbeds and Border Designs

              CRUZ GARDENING SERVICE
              Ill work on the design tomorrow i am using Microsoft word to make this hehe so lets see if i can do it all btw i removed my name off the header

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              • #8
                Or even consider some kind of special offer at top too. It looks very nice though.
                hi steve i think i might be able to include a 25% off coupon on the bottom i think it would not look that good on the top but then again i have never tried it
                thanks for the idea ull see the new one tomorrow its bed time now

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                • #9
                  hi steve i think i might be able to include a 25% off coupon on the bottom i think it would not look that good on the top but then again i have never tried it
                  Remember, you want your attention getting headline or offer at the top. You want to grab the readers attention as quickly as possible so they will read the rest of the flyer.
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                  • #10
                    Update

                    here is the update some changes have been implemented and i am still wondering where i can add the 25% coupon also don't know about the color combination :P let me know what you guys think of the update
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                    • #11
                      Remember, you want your attention getting headline or offer at the top. You want to grab the readers attention as quickly as possible so they will read the rest of the flyer.
                      im still wondering where i should place the 25% off coupon

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                      • #12
                        Corrections

                        Hi friend!

                        Here are my inputs, and as Steve says, try to put the offer at the top to grab the attention quickly. I think you can reduce the size of both boxes and distribute the text more efficiently to gain space for the coupon.

                        If you send me the elements, I can re-do it for you (at no charge!) using photoshop. Let me know.

                        Good luck!


                        here is the update some changes have been implemented and i am still wondering where i can add the 25% coupon also don't know about the color combination :P let me know what you guys think of the update
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                        • #13
                          Hi friend!

                          Here are my inputs, and as Steve says, try to put the offer at the top to grab the attention quickly. I think you can reduce the size of both boxes and distribute the text more efficiently to gain space for the coupon.

                          If you send me the elements, I can re-do it for you (at no charge!) using photoshop. Let me know.

                          Good luck!
                          what you think about this one? the corrections have been implemented and the font color was changed
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                          Last edited by cruzgardening; 04-10-2011, 02:06 AM. Reason: adding words

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                          • #14
                            That looks good. While you are experimenting, why not try putting the 25% off coupon at the top where you now have the 'we make it green' wording.

                            What do you feel would grab your eye more on a flyer 'We make it green.' or '25% off!'
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                            • #15
                              It looks much better!

                              Now it looks much better!

                              I think you can add the 25% OFF coupon inside the left box at the very bottom. Just play a bit with the spaces.

                              what you think about this one? the corrections have been implemented and the font color was changed

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