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    so here is my bussiness card what do you guys think? anything i should change?


  • #2
    Hate the font.
    Boughter's Lawn Care Services Mowing and Fertilizing in New Castle, PA

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    • #3
      To be honest.... keep it simple too much on one side. Move some of it to the back.

      logo phone number and name on the front Maybe take the services out of the logo and put them on the back and shrink the logo.
      Pat

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      • #4
        back side is a referral form here is a revision moved some stuff around

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        • #5
          Try ditching the address. Not really needed on a card these days.
          Pat

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          • #6
            i was actually thinking that as i was trying to find a place to put it on the card

            killed the adress

            Last edited by richsoucie; 10-20-2010, 10:47 PM.

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            • #7
              last revision had to change font color in logo because my truck is blue
              [IMG]http://www.********.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=202656&stc=1&d=1287640 852[/IMG]

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              • #8
                final product still trying to aquire .com address
                Last edited by richsoucie; 10-21-2010, 08:58 AM.

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                • #9
                  Changed the font and reworded some stuff

                  [IMG]http://www.********.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=202668&stc=1&d=1287675 453[/IMG]

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                  • #10
                    Looks better except the word "owner"

                    Lose it or move it to the right side would be better.
                    Pat

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                    • #11
                      You are very talented. Nice work on the card. The only thing I can think of is to try it with and without the shadow font. See which one you like better and go for it
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