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Steve
12-28-2007, 09:04 AM
Matt just wrote me this idea for a Myspace bulletin advertisement and asked for my advice on it.

I thought it was best to get feedback from everyone because it could get a lot more responses that would help.

Here is the ad.

Quote[/b] ]LIMITED TIME OFFER, NEW YEARS LAWN SPECIAL

money scarce after christmas?

Does your lawn look sad and distrested?

Your lawn scare people away?

Friends say o my gosh, there lawn needs help?

Have a distrested lawn, impress it with J & M Lawn Care


What type of services would this include and would there be a discount for a limited time or how would that work?

landonkade
12-28-2007, 11:35 AM
Quote[/b] (Team Gopher @ Dec. 28 2007,10:04)]Matt just wrote me this idea for a Myspace bulletin advertisement and asked for my advice on it.

I thought it was best to get feedback from everyone because it could get a lot more responses that would help.

Here is the ad.

Quote[/b] ]LIMITED TIME OFFER, NEW YEARS LAWN SPECIAL

money scarce after christmas?

Does your lawn look sad and distrested?

Your lawn scare people away?

Friends say o my gosh, there lawn needs help?

Have a distrested lawn, impress it *with J & M Lawn Care


What type of services would this include and would there be a discount for a limited time or how would that work?
here is what i put on the myspace bulletin for after christmas



Year End "BLOW OUT" on Lawn Service****YAYAAAA

15% off all services below for the entire month of January...

on all myspace customers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Lawn maintenance (mowing, edging, etc)
Leaf Removal
Shrub and Hedge Trimming
Tree Pruning
Tree and Shrub Planting
Flower Bed Maintenance
Planting of Perennial or Annual Flowers
Mulch, Bark and Decorative Rock Installation
Spring and Fall Cleanup
Irrigation
Pressure Washing

CALL : TODAY

J & M Lawn Care / Landscaping
334-618-1916
www.dothanlawncare.com
************************************************************
here is another one :

Fall / Winter Clean-Up (ACT NOW)

Weekends were made for living, not yard work!

Leaves keep falling / Choking your lawn / Lawn cant breathe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Overgrown Shrubs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Have u said the heck with the leaves. Let them pile up

Is your lawn sick, shrubs sad, down and out

J & M Lawn Care / Landscaping can help. We can clean your lawn up in one visit.

Have friends needing lawn service we offer a referral program. Have to be a customer in order to receive the referral program. No one time visits

Give Us A Call Today. We Will Be Glad To Help

J & M Lawn Care / Landscaping
334-618-1916
www.dothanlawncare.com

Steve
12-28-2007, 02:38 PM
I like how you have a limited time offer that applies only for the month of January.

What is your thought on including something like that in your second ad?

landonkade
12-28-2007, 04:08 PM
Quote[/b] (Team Gopher @ Dec. 28 2007,3:38)]I like how you have a limited time offer that applies only for the month of January.

What is your thought on including something like that in your second ad?
expiration dates are always good, makes them act faster. So that they wont just look at and say ummmm good idea but i will think of that later

expiration dates- ummmm i need to act on that special before that goes away,lol

i am going to repost the seond ad here shortly with a expiration date, i forgot to,lol

i have almost 200 friends on my myspace that are 5-10 miles from me

i'll just keep posting bulletins and hoping people see it and act on it

Steve
12-29-2007, 11:00 AM
Good! I am looking forwards to hearing about the results!

LawnMoore
02-18-2011, 12:13 AM
This is good stuff, lets get it up to the top of the forum!

Hedgemaster
02-18-2011, 10:31 AM
Are there actually adults (who don't live in their parent's basement) that use Myspace?

I've seen a few Myspace pages. I shook my head, wept for our future, and vowed not to step back into "Thatspace" again.

Growing Green
02-18-2011, 12:21 PM
Are there actually adults (who don't live in their parent's basement) that use Myspace?

I've seen a few Myspace pages. I shook my head, wept for our future, and vowed not to step back into "Thatspace" again.

LOL Back in 2007 the transition was happening from myspace to FB. Now Facebook is where to advertise in my opinion. I'm not going to waste my time with myspace. No way!

Matt