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richsoucie
10-20-2010, 11:03 PM
so here is my bussiness card what do you guys think? anything i should change?

http://www.plowsite.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=81545&stc=1&d=1287627908

mark123
10-20-2010, 11:10 PM
Hate the font.

The Cleaning Doctor
10-20-2010, 11:13 PM
To be honest.... keep it simple too much on one side. Move some of it to the back.

logo phone number and name on the front Maybe take the services out of the logo and put them on the back and shrink the logo.

richsoucie
10-20-2010, 11:33 PM
back side is a referral form here is a revision moved some stuff around
http://www.plowsite.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=81555&stc=1&d=1287631960

The Cleaning Doctor
10-20-2010, 11:37 PM
Try ditching the address. Not really needed on a card these days.

richsoucie
10-20-2010, 11:38 PM
i was actually thinking that as i was trying to find a place to put it on the card

killed the adress

http://www.plowsite.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=81556&stc=1&d=1287632827

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 02:01 AM
last revision had to change font color in logo because my truck is blue
http://www.********.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=202656&stc=1&d=1287640852

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 09:56 AM
final product still trying to aquire .com address
http://www.plowsite.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=81558&stc=1&d=1287669243

richsoucie
10-21-2010, 11:40 AM
Changed the font and reworded some stuff

http://www.********.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=202668&stc=1&d=1287675453

The Cleaning Doctor
10-21-2010, 02:13 PM
Looks better except the word "owner"

Lose it or move it to the right side would be better.

Steve
10-21-2010, 02:16 PM
You are very talented. Nice work on the card. The only thing I can think of is to try it with and without the shadow font. See which one you like better and go for it :)