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stew6371
04-18-2010, 06:18 PM
Is this too busy or too much info? Lets have some feedback. Thanks

justin_time
04-18-2010, 06:19 PM
What program did ya use to make your flyer ?

I can't seem to recognize the file type you are using.

Please save it as a .doc and we'll be able to open it

stew6371
04-18-2010, 06:37 PM
Sorry. I used open office. Try this. also I will post another version. I made a few small changes.

justin_time
04-18-2010, 06:53 PM
Kind of hard to read, not because of the colors but because the font.

Maybe change the font to something easier to read then your flyer is all set.

I'd suggest to change it to Arial or something

mark123
04-18-2010, 07:59 PM
Kind of hard to read, not because of the colors but because the font.
I was going to type this exact same thing.

stew6371
04-18-2010, 08:05 PM
I was kind of thinking the same, but I wanted some responses. I made a change. Now what do you think?

justin_time
04-18-2010, 08:10 PM
Better ! You can delete your 2nd page if your going to print the document, it's going to print a blank page for nothing

mark123
04-18-2010, 08:33 PM
Comic Sans has weird kerning that I just can't like. The number is still in that old font and you definitely want that legible. It is at least readable now. :)

stew6371
04-18-2010, 09:25 PM
Comic Sans has weird kerning that I just can't like. The number is still in that old font and you definitely want that legible. It is at least readable now. :)

I didnt change that. I will though.

Better ! You can delete your 2nd page if your going to print the document, it's going to print a blank page for nothing

I dont know why it has a 2nd page. Thanks for mentioning that. I wouldnt have paid attention when I went to print it. Here is my rough sketch of my business cards and door magnets.
ore critiquing please.

jklawncare
04-18-2010, 10:09 PM
bigger image? and if ones a door magnet than id deffinately take alot of the detailed text off..

cars drive by..you need it quick and simple..Name Number and maybe Motto with free estimates and a website..dont go into alot of detail..the text needs to be big enough to read and easy enough to catch the eye

stew6371
04-18-2010, 10:19 PM
My bad. This is bigger. The door magnet doesn't have much text on it.

Steve
04-18-2010, 11:30 PM
The graphics are very nice and very colorful!

picframer
04-19-2010, 05:18 AM
Looks good, two suggestions, add your website and personally I would take out the Spaces are Limited, I have been in and managed marketing divisions for a long time and the amount I learned from them has been priceless, the general public based on my observations may see this as a pressure tactic and it may turn some off, others see is as desperation in trying to fill the slots, just my 2 cents.

stew6371
04-20-2010, 04:27 AM
Looks good, two suggestions, add your website

I don't have one yet.

and personally I would take out the Spaces are Limited, I have been in and managed marketing divisions for a long time and the amount I learned from them has been priceless, the general public based on my observations may see this as a pressure tactic and it may turn some off, others see is as desperation in trying to fill the slots, just my 2 cents.

That makes sense.